Paperback: 160 pages
Publisher: Multnomah (May 1, 2006)
Language: English
ISBN-10: 1590526791
ISBN-13: 978-1590526798
Product Dimensions: 5.2 x 0.4 x 8.2 inches
Shipping Weight: 4.8 ounces (View shipping rates and policies)
Average Customer Review: 4.8 out of 5 stars See all reviews (90 customer reviews)
Best Sellers Rank: #61,328 in Books (See Top 100 in Books) #9 in Books > Teens > Literature & Fiction > Religious > Christian > Action & Adventure #20 in Books > Teens > Literature & Fiction > Religious > Christian > Historical #27 in Books > Teens > Historical Fiction > Medieval
A few weeks ago, my wife and I had the opportunity to attend the Florida Homeschool Convention. It was a great convention, with lots of incredible workshops and great resources. While we were there, we took a walk through the vendor's area (actually, we took several walks through there...). My son was drawn to one particular table, holding a display of books... and swords.My kids looked at the swords, I looked at the books, but we didn't buy either. we had just moved to Florida, and extra funds were simply non-existent at the moment. As we browsed, though, I struck up a conversation with the guy behind the table, Chuck Black, author of Kingdom's Dawn (Kingdom, Book 1), and several other books.A year ago, I read and reviewed Sir Rowan and the Camerian Conquest (The Knights of Arrethtrae), the fifth book in Black's Knights Of Arrethtrae series. That series is the follow-up series to The Kingdom series, of which Kingdom's Dawn is the first. Chuck handed me Kingdom's Dawn, asking if I would do the same again.As Chuck and I talked, explained to me that The Kingdom series, and Kingdom's Dawn, is written as an allegorical series of novels, attempting to capture the incredible story of the Bible. Kingdom's Dawn covers the book of Genesis, describing Leinad's adventures through life, including hearing about Creation, experiencing Noah's Flood, and living through the stories of Abraham, Isaac, Jacob, and Joseph.
I really wanted to like this book. I love YA literature and fantasy novels, especially the medieval "knights-and-castles" style. And I love good Christian allegory. So I came to this book really hoping that it would be a good read. And... it's really only Okay at best.It's a very short book, only about 130-140 pages including the prologue and epilogue. That's not a lot of space to develop a complex plot, but this is a part of a six book series so there was definitely room to at least begin building towards a good story. The problem is that there is too much plot for that amount of space. I felt like I was reading an in-depth summary rather than a novel. There were sections of the story that had great potential for weight and development, but they were glossed over in a few paragraphs. This not only weakened the story telling, but also did not allow for much character development. The characters weren't bad necessarily, just generic and severely underdeveloped. The main character Leinad had the most description and some little development, but not nearly as much as he could have had.On almost every page the author broke the most basic rule of writing, "show, don't tell". Character traits and responses were told to the reader rather than shown through actions or dialogue. This is ok sometimes, but it seemed like any time the author wanted to communicate something he just straight up told it to me rather than showed me. There were also several points in the narrative where Leinad asked internal questions that the reader should be asking already. These were not necessary to include and didn't add to the tension at all. In fact these thoughts would often break up the flow of the narrative rather than enhance it.
Kingdom's Dawn (Kingdom, Book 1) Kingdom's Dawn: Kingdom's Series, Book 1 The Golden Dawn: The Original Account of the Teachings, Rites & Ceremonies of the Hermetic Order (Llewellyn's Golden Dawn Series) The Moth and the Flame: A Wrath & the Dawn Short Story (The Wrath and the Dawn) Kingdom's Hope (Kingdom, Book 2) Kingdom's Quest (Kingdom, Book 5) Kingdom's Edge (Kingdom, Book 3) Kingdom's Call (Kingdom, Book 4) Kingdom's Call: Kingdom Series, Book 4 Kingdom's Edge: Kingdom Series, Book 3 Kingdom's Reign (Kingdom, Book 6) Kingdom's Reign: Kingdom Series, Book 6 Kingdom's Hope: Kingdom Series, Book 2 The Phoenix of Destiny: An Epic Kingdom of Fantasy Adventure (Geronimo Stilton and the Kingdom of Fantasy: Special Edition) Kingdom's Quest: Kingdom Series #5 The Hidden Magic of Walt Disney World Trivia: A Ride-by-Ride Exploration of the History, Facts, and Secrets Behind the Magic Kingdom, Epcot, Disney's Hollywood Studios, and Disney's Animal Kingdom Gospel of the Kingdom: Scriptural Studies in the Kingdom of God Magical Dawn Coloring Book: Published in Sweden as "Magisk Gryning" The Neutronium Alchemist: The Night's Dawn Trilogy, Book 2 Emancipation Proclamation: Lincoln and the Dawn of Liberty (Carter G Woodson Award Book (Awards))